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Mareike was browsing through Markus belonging for a while. It took her some time to find something, but finally she succeeded: She found a second mobile hid in Markus luggage. Curiously she browsed the address list. Her sight fell on a female name: Magdalena. She pushed the connect button.

“Markus dear! I thought you couldn’t call me this weekend, since you’re away with this broad...a female voice said. Mareike was furious. She had heard enough. She switched the mobile of, when she heard someone open the door. Quickly, Mareike hid inside the closet. Now she was rather glad that she was trapped inside the small body of her daughter.

“Mama, are you here?” Mareike heard her own voice calling her. She sighed with relief and came out of the closet.

“I’m here, honey!”she called. “And you were right: Markus is a dick. He was seeing another woman while betraying both of us.”

“You don’t have to worry about Markus anymore. Martha took care of him. ”Lisa-Marie explained.

“Who’s Martha?”

“Sorry, I forgot! Please come with me and I’ll explain everything.” Lisa-Marie concluded and let the way to Martha’s lamp.


With a burst of smoke, Martha came out of her lamp. “Did you just summon me, mistress?” she asked Lisa-Marie.

“Yes, I did.”

“Now I’m relieved. I had a terrifying experience: My arm seemed to be dissolving, but luckily I was just teleported back to my own lamp a second before being summoned by you.” Martha gasped.

“I don’t want to interrupt your conversation, but if you are a genie, can you turn us back?” Mareike interfered.

“That’s for Lisa-Marie to decide. She still got one wish left.” Martha explained.

“Before I use that wish, I have to know something: Will you send me to that school anyway?” Lisa-Marie addressed her mother.

“Only if you want to, I promise.” Mareike answered.

“Alright. If she doesn’t keep this promise, will you grant me another wish, Martha” Lisa-Marie turned towards the genie.” Martha was a bit reluctant. Maybe granting more wishes would break another genie rule? But on the other hand, she liked Lisa-Marie and so, she just nodded.

“Then hear my last wish: I wish, that my mother and I would be back in our original bodies.”

“Wish granted!” Martha said and blinked.

The next moment, Lisa-Marie and Mareike were looking down on themselves. They were in their original bodies again. Smiling Lisa-Marie run to Martha and embraced her.

“Thank you very much!” Mareike said, before addressing her daughter again. “You have to tell me what had happened downstairs. And then we should talk about the next steps.”

“Ok, Mama, we will!”

“I’ll leave you two alone!” Martha concluded and left the room.


The next morning, Martha was back at the front desk, when Mareike and Lisa-Marie were leaving the elevator. Lisa-Marie was wearing the uniform of the boarding school. Her Goth makeup had disappeared.

“We are checking out!” Mareike explained and returned the key cards.

“May I ask what you will do know? Martha asked them.

“I decided to give the school a chance.” Lisa-Marie said. “Maybe you’e right and it’s not that boring at all. And if it is boring, my mother promised to get me out of there.”

“Glad to hear that. I really hope you’ll like it there. Have a good voyage.” Martha winked as mother and daughter left the hotel.

THE END

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Mallory36's avatar
On one hand, it seems pretty convenient that Markus was cheating on Mareike. I guess that makes things easier, though it does seem odd that Magdalena seems to know that Markus is cheating on her, and doesn't seem to particularly mind it. Well, aside from insulting Marieke.

Markus got off surprisingly easy in the end.

And Sami is back again. Guess we're going to keep seeing him. Guess Martha likes having a genie friend. It's kinda' funny, how panicky Martha was getting over her arm disappearing.

And a happy ending, with mother and daughter getting along better, and boyfriend leaving their lives. Though it does seem, in the end, he did have the right idea for the school Lisa-Marie, though it does seem his motives for that were hardly pure.